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Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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Faizan Rana said:

Doctor Sam said:

dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..


Koi
koi surat nazar nahin aati
koi umeed bar nahin aati ,
moot ka aik din mutaaen hai
nend kyun raat bar nahin aati

reply to faizan with > surat
seerat kay hum ghulam hain,surat hui to kia
surkh o safaid mitti ki moorat hui to kia
Posted 12 Dec 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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Doctor Sam said:

dasht
dasht to dasht hain darya bhi na chorday hum ne
behr-e-zulmaat main dorda diye ghorday hum ne..


doctor sahib
aap kay shair main lafz >darya< hai
jab keh theek lafz sehra hai
darustgee farma lain
shukria ......................hkb
Posted 12 Dec 2005

Topic: haar chaley

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§alman AzaÐ said:

wow niCe


thanx salman
Posted 12 Dec 2005

Topic: kia yeh joke hai ?

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wafakadard said:

nhi

Yeh Funny Police hai


think so
Posted 10 Dec 2005

Topic: 5 star hotel main dinner

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Posted 10 Dec 2005

Topic: baarish

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nice poetry
Posted 10 Dec 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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suna
suna hai apney hi they ghar lootney waley
chalo achha hua main ney yeh tamasha nahi dekha
Posted 10 Dec 2005

Topic: batbazi

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ye udasiyoN ki raateiN chalo andherey meiN hi kaateiN
jo chiraagh bujh chukey heiN ab kya unhaiN jalaana
Posted 10 Dec 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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QUEEN VICTORIA said:

kuch nahin mangta shaho say yeh SHAIDA tera
is ki dolat hai faqy naqsh e kaf e paa tera

Posted 09 Dec 2005

Topic: Chk it

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nice poetry selection
Posted 08 Dec 2005

Topic: Fairl_Girl’s Collecti&#111;n + OWN

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Fairl_Girl said:


~*~Waqat Se Waqat Ki Kya Shikayat Karrein~*~
Waqat Se Waqat Ki Kya Shikayat Karein
Waqat Hi Na Raha Waqat Ki Baat Hai
Uss Ney Dekha Muje Ussney Chaha Muje
Ussnay Thukra Diya Waqat Ki Baat Hai
Koi Mushkil Parri Koi Kaam Aa Gaya
Zehan Mein Usskay Jo Mera Naam Aa Gaya
Baad Muddat Ke Woh Doston Ki Tarrah
Hum Se Huss Ke Milla Waqat Ki Baat Hai
Zindagi Hum Say Anjaan Tu Ho Gai
Ek Rishtay Ki Pehchaan Tu Ho Gayi
Koi Chahat Na Thi Bas Murrawatt Thi
Woh Khud KO Samjha Liya Waqat Ki Baat Hai
Apna Rang-e-Muhabbat Hai Sab Se Juda
Koi Pochhay Tu Rashid Kahon Or Kya

Jiss ko Payaa Nahi Ussko Kho Ker Bhi Main
Kiyon Ussi Ka Raha Waqat Ki Baat Hai


kia baat hai waqt ki aur aap ki

thanx 4sharing such as nice poetry
Posted 08 Dec 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Pers&#111;nal Poetry Collecti&#111;n

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new_beau said:



ROOSHANAASI...I think its wrong Word here..ROO means CHEHRA...aur ZAAT ka chehra nahin kaha ja sakta ...Try to change this misrah...



Buzurg-o-Bertar ..ko MERDAM SHANAASI kay paimaanay say Samajhna chahtay hainn aap...MERDAM shanaasi insaan ko Parakhnay kay liyey hoti hay..Yeh aap BUZERG-O-BERTER kis keh rahay hainn..EXPLAINN







These shairs are very good NIKLAY jo NIKLAINN say change ker lainn..I think..




AASII...means Gunehgaar...aur yeh ALIF say nahin AIN say hota hay...AIN ALIF SUAD YEH..

Change it,..and Reconsider this Shair...Iss mainn Kuchh Ziyaada JAAN nahin hay abhi...Agar AAP NAY ALIF say likha hay aur uss ka koi aur matlab hay tou sorry...but pls explain..





Very Good And Meaning Ful...


nice selection
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Pers&#111;nal Poetry Collecti&#111;n

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Na!ma said:

Virdan said:

Very nice ...

bohat umda poetry hai jee
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: Amir Virdan’s Pers&#111;nal Poetry Collecti&#111;n

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Virdan said:



nice sharing
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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gaya
woh chala gaya hai mujhey chhorh kar aur apni yaad bhi day gaya
main kharha hoon aisey muqaam per na firaaq hai na wisaal hai
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: THE HEART OF SHAH JI D&#079;NT FORGET TO SEE I

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nice collection
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: batbazi

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yehi behtar hoga keh katra key nikal janey dey
saamna hoga to dil -----phir sey machal jae ga

alif
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: ~ -- SALL’s Corner -- ~

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Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: ~ -- SALL’s Corner -- ~

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QUEEN VICTORIA said:


nice sharing
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: ~ -- SALL’s Corner -- ~

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SALL said:

hum aaaaaaa gae
ik zara sochne do





azaab e wehshat e jaan ka sila na maange koi
naae safr k liye raasta na maange koi

buland haathon mei zanjeer daal dete hein
ajeeb rasm chali hai k dua na maange koi

tamam shehr mukarram bass aik mujrim me
so mere baad mera khoon baha na maange koi

koi to shehr e tazbazab k sakinon se kahe
na ho yakeen to phir mo'jza na maange koi

azaab gard khizan bhi na ho bahaar bhi aae
iss ehtyaat se ajr e wafa na maange koi


isnt it justttttttttt,,,,,,
beautiful


sari post hi behtreen
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: Qaasid

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rapunzel said:

hawwa ki beti said:

nice post


thanku

welcome jee

qaasid paigham e shoq ko daina na bohat tool
kehna faqat itna keh ----aankhain taras gaeen
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: shair main sey kisi bhi lafz sey shair

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log
aao aik sajda karain---- aalim e madhosh main
log kehtey hain keh saghar ko khuda yaad nahin
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: batbazi

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Yeh shab hai ya meray dil ka sukoot bay payaan.
yeh dil hai ya meray marqad pay jal raha hai charag


next > ghain <
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: - - - December - - - (Tujh Bin...)

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nice poem
Posted 07 Dec 2005

Topic: New Member

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welcome jee
Posted 05 Dec 2005

Topic: hi

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i think so ,welcome anyway
Posted 05 Dec 2005

Topic: Hey every&#111;ne

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jee aayan nu

hun gal bunny
Posted 05 Dec 2005

Topic: hiya ppl..!

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w a aslam & welcome here
Posted 05 Dec 2005

Topic: Queen’s Shikaar

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thats good
Posted 05 Dec 2005

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welcome
Posted 05 Dec 2005
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